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3 ugly bananas

Tonight the fruit store owner sold me 3 ugly bananas.

I asked: “Can you cut 2 bananas for me ? I just eat 2 tonight.”

She said: “ hey, would you like to have these bananas, they look not good but still taste ok. I sell you cheaper.”

I don’t care so I bought.

How yummy bananas they are !

They are fat and sweet.

Looking at the bananas, I had a warm feeling of move, they looked like the smile of my future babies, fat cheeks and bright eyes.

I want to have my own boy babies before 35 years old.

The bananas tasted soft and light sweet. At that moment, I was not afraid of getting old. I like the present me at 23 years old rather than at 18 years old, because I have overcame some drawbacks and be stronger.

I want to be a better woman. Being brave enough to smile to the cruel life.

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    3 ugly bananas

    Tonight, the fruit store owner sold me 3 ugly bananas.

    I asked: “Can you cut 2 bananas for me ? I'll just eat 2 tonight.”

    She said: “ Hey, would you like to have these bananas? They don't look not good, but still taste ok. I sell them to you cheaper.”

    I didn’t care, so I bought them.

    What yummy bananas they were!

    They were fat and sweet.

    Looking at the bananas, I had a warm feeling of being moved, they looked like the smile of my future babies, fat cheeks and bright eyes.

    I want to have my own boy babies before 35 years old.

    The bananas tasted soft and light sweet. At that moment, I was not afraid of getting old. I like the present me at 23 years old rather than at 18 years old, because I have overcome some drawbacks and am stronger.

    I want to be a better woman, being brave enough to smile to the cruel life.

     

    [Good work and nice story.]

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