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be slow in choosing a good person and much slower while loosing them'.............because relationship is not an opportunity. it is a sweet responsibility............

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    be slow in choosing a good person and much slower while loosing them'.............because relationship is not an opportunity. it is a sweet responsibility............

     

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    Relationships

     

    Be slow in choosing a good person, and much slower when letting them go, because a relationship is not an opportunity; it is a sweet responsibility.

     

    This is a long sentence. Though it can be technically correct, it might be better to split it up into two parts like this:

     

    Be slow in choosing a good person, and much slower when letting them go. A relationship is not an opportunity; it is a sweet responsibility. 

     

    Very wise words!!! :)

     

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    Be slow in choosing a good person and much slower when losingending them because a relationship is not an opportunity, it is a sweet responsibility...

     

    Well said.

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