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Choosing a profession is very important step that affects your future and its importance may go unappreciated. Young people look at many factors when taking this decision, a high income, for example. A good salary is no doubt so attractive young people because it helps them to make good career, find their own place in life [perhaps more idiomatic to say 'find their own path in life'] and get financial independence from their parents, and [is also important for their overall] well-being. Also, it is a big influence on quality of life. But will a high-paying job allow you to you feel happiness and inner satisfaction? [Hard present what torture it will be to do unpleasant work without any pleasure a rest of life. – I'm sorry, I do not understand this sentence but feel free to send it to me in Russian and we can try and make sense of it together.]
For some people, a high salary doesn't influence their future profession. For them, work satisfaction matters more. Such people don't aim for wealth in the first place. It is terrific when someone can do what he or she likes, what makes him or her happy, and get a permanent [do you mean 'fixed' perhaps?] income for this job. If this does not work out, sooner or later people have got to change their job in order to find new post which pays more. The final aim is to get material comfort. As such, importance of getting good money for your job should not be denied. A profession needs to be chosen with wit. Your profession must correspond to your own preferences and wishes, be that a good salary or good company in this profession [again, not quite sure what you meant there but do send me the sentence in Russian and we can try and work it out togather]. If these components are combined, [you will be able to understand what you can watch as variant again, not quite sure what you meant there but do send me the sentence in Russian and we can try and work it out togather].
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