I need to read this small article in our class,hope you to give me some advice.

One day, I was walking with my boyfriend.
My boyfriend said, "You don't are not romantic at all, don't not like other girls was who are very romantic and lovely."
I answered him with an emotional face, "I love you, I can't live without you even just for one minute. My life without you would be just like the fish without water, and the person without the air. so What about you, my dear? "
He said :"You are not my air. Without you I also can live very nicely(or<em> easily</em>) because I can buy an oxygen bottle."
Then  I kicked him out from the earth of my life.

I need to read this short story in our class,_I hope you can give me some advice.

One day,_I was walking with my boyfriend._Then he said: "You aren't romantic at all. Other girls I've met are very romantic and lovely".
I replied to him with an emotional face:_"I love you,_I can't live without you even for just one minute._My life without you_would be just like a fish out of water,_or a person without_air._So what about you,_my dear? "
He said:_"You are not my air,_I could live very nicely without you, because I could buy an oxygen bottle". 
Then I kicked him so hard, his feet left the ground. Very funny story!! Regards!! :D