In my wonderland In my wonderland, people can grow rice, wheat, and corn in the same fields for everyone who want to eat different foods. Beside the field of olive, children, who from Africa, play hid

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Kenny

In my wonderland In my wonderland, people can grow rice, wheat, and corn in the same fields for everyone who want to eat different foods. Beside the field of olive, children, who from Africa, play hide and sick with those from China together. According to the law by the king, people don't allow to work after 6 pm and he helds a party for all with various liquor, pizza, dumpling, tacos, borsch, sushi, and others. Men and women really work hard and do not forget laughing for families, friends, and anyone who want to enjoy his life. Anything happen in this world if people don't hurt others. they don't need to cry cuz they haven't ever done that and even don't know how to do that. everyone can't understand what a word of 'war' means. in my wonderland, people of all races shake hands with each other forever.

May 25, 2013 4:39 PM

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In my wonderland

In my wonderland, people can could grow rice, wheat, and corn in the same fields for everyone who wants to eat different foods. Beside (the field of olives/the olive field), children, who are from Africa, could play hide and sick with those from China together. According (to the law by the king/to the king's law), people don't wouldn't be allowed to work after 6 pm and he would helds hold a party parties for all with various liquor, pizza, dumpling, tacos, borsch, sushi, and others. Men and women would really work hard and do would not forget to laughing for with their families, friends, and or anyone who would want to enjoy his life. Anything could happen in this world if people don't didn't hurt others. (They don't wouldn't need/There wouldn't be a need) to cry cuz they haven't wouldn't haveever done that and wouldn't even don't know how to do that. Everyone can't wouldn't understand what a the word of 'war' means. In my wonderland, people of all races would shake hands with each other forever.