teresa
married 今天,我意气风发想用英文写一篇关于我近期的生活状况的小作文,却不知如何用英文下手,才发现英文水平又直线下降,更何况是本身英文底子就不好,下手更为困难。无奈之下我选择用中文下手,顿时因此也感到很悲伤! 我在今年的5月的某个日子了,迈入婚姻的殿堂,结束25年的单身生活,开始了2人的生活。生活的转变并没有引起很大的心情变化,一切都依旧,一切如故。 不过,我认为我选择的伴侣是我所期待的! 在生活中,我慢慢的发现自己对生活的态度存在很大的问题,负面的影响着我的生活,我的工作,总而言之,我的精神状态有崩溃之迹。问题来自于,不善于发现问题,不恰当的处理问题,问题的严重性随之而来,展现我的生活破窘。我该是好好学习调节自己,热爱生活,热爱自己,生命的意义。 最后,一定要过好生活,感受幸福。
May 30, 2013 5:05 AM
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今天,我意气风发想用英文写一篇关于我近期的生活状况的小作文,却不知如何用英文下手,才发现英文水平又直线下降,更何况是本身英文底子就不好,下手更为困难。无奈之下我选择用中文下手,顿时因此也感到很悲伤!
我在今年的5月的某个日子了,迈入婚姻的殿堂,结束25年的单身生活,开始了2人的生活。生活的转变并没有引起很大的心情变化,一切都依旧,一切如故。 不过,我认为我选择的伴侣是我所期待的!
在生活中,我慢慢的发现自己对生活的态度存在很大的问题,负面的影响着我的生活,我的工作,总而言之,我的精神状态有崩溃之迹。问题来自于,不善于发现问题,不恰当的处理问题,问题的严重性随之而来,展现我的生活破窘。我该是好好学习调节自己,热爱生活,热爱自己,生命的意义。
最后,一定要过好生活,感受幸福。

 

This is how I would translate what you wrote. It is not an exact straight translation, but I think it translates the meaning of what you are trying to say well. 

 

Today I was really excited to write a notebook entry about whats happening in my life, but I just didn't know how to do it in English. This made me realize that my english is in a downward spiral, not to mention it wasn't very good to begin with. Trying to write this just made things worse. The fact that I could only write this in Chinese made me really sad.

One day this May, I stepped into the Chapel, ending 25 years of single life and begining married life. This change in my lifestyle hasn't led to any changes in my mood, everything is the same as it was before. I think the person I chose to marry was the one I had been waiting for.

 

I am slowly realizing that a big problem exists in my attitude toward life, which is having a negative influence on my work and my life. In short, I feel like I am collapsing spiritually. This stems from the fact that I am not good at identifying problems or dealing with them appropriately, so they become more and more serious. My life is becoming embarrassing. I should learn how to adjust my attitude, to love life and to love myself, which is the meaning of life. 

 

Lastly, I definitely want to live a good life, and feel blessings of happiness.

 

 

 

May 30, 2013
你能这么早结婚,已经挺幸福了…现在不坚强点,以后还要生娃带孩儿呢…
March 27, 2015
I think there is a logic problem in your writing. from the 2nd paragraph. it seems after all you get what you think it is right and you feel no big changes of your life. but later you said you are nearly breakdown, which makes it become you are breakdown all the time in your more than 20 years, which sounds horrible. anyway, have a nice day.
May 30, 2013

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By ending my 25 years single time and starting the life of two, I will get married in some day of May this year. The change of life doesn't result in emotion. Things are as usual, as before. However, I do think the man I choose is the one.
I realized that I have problems of attitudes towards life. It effect my life and work in a negative way. All in all, my soul is wondering at the edge of breakdown. Not good at recognition of the problems and no be able to handle the problems bring more problems. It also leads to the severity of the problems and appears as my poor life. I should study to adjust and begin to love my life and love myself. I need to know the meaning of the life.

At last, a good life shall be there and the happiness shall be shared.

May 30, 2013
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