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TOEFL essay - intro- big factory near to my community

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Industrialization is fundamental for the economy of cities and countries. However, to build a factory near to a village or city have advantages and disadvantages for the local community. In my point of view, to build a large factory near to my community is a bad idea for several reasons.

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    TOEFL essay - intro- big factory near to my community

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    Industrialization is fundamental essential for the healthy economy of cities and countries. However, to build a factory near to a village or city have has advantages and disadvantages for the local community. In my opinion point of view, to building a large factory near to my community is a bad idea for several reasons.

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