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This morning I got up early, about 8,30 . I went out with dogs , after that I had a brekfast ( toast bread with olive oil ) . Later I went shopping and finally I am relaxing on my sofa. ¡ I love relaxing on Saturday !!

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    Shopping

    This morning I got up early, about 8,30 . I went out with the dogs then came back and after that I had a breakfast ( toast bread with olive oil ) . Later, I went shopping and now I am finally I am relaxing on my sofa. ¡ I love relaxing on Saturday !!

    Good job Charo!  Toast with olive oil for breakfast sounds a bit strange to me as I prefer my toast with peanut butter which probably sounds weird to you!

    Shopping

    This morning I got up early, about 8,30 . I went out with my dogs, and after that I had a breakfast ( toast bread with olive oil ). Later I went shopping and finally I am relaxing on my sofa.  I love relaxing on Saturday !!

     

    [Good work.  You have to indicate which dogs they were - it could have been "the dogs".  Also "toast" to us implies toasted bread, to "toast bread" is redundant.]

    Shopping

    This morning I got up early, about 8,30 . I went out with my dogs , after that I had a breakfast ( toast bread with olive oil ) . Later I went shopping and finally I am relaxing on my sofa. ¡ I love relaxing on Saturday !!

     

    Good job!

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