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Can you alter my essay? Something about today design class and my feeling;)

Hi ,l am sweety;) yes ,under is my paingting. thank you see it .l hope you can alter my essay ;)Today in the moring ,we have design class. two students said that what best do they like about art .one student indroduce a artist named :David hockney.do you know this man?He is a british artist,Paintings represent as <<Chris dov check, repair and tang》,<< flute and clark couple.>>.l like he because his reveal the secrets of the world famous paintings. Hockney at an early age to follow the development of pop art (Popart) Hamilton, pop art in the United States for heyday, 60 s representative R. lichtenstein and A. warhol. Their characteristic is people daily necessities of food and clothing live line drawing objects, using the method of physical collage, environmental design, object is delicate, deformation, has the nature of the advertisement design, showing as cold detached style.
another student said chinese painting :shibamiao .yes you can not clear know that;) but bellow you will see chinese painting , undermy painting.
chine history is very long ,have very old special chlture..for example: tea.silk . brush.ceramic so on ,we have mang things to learn;).
Afrernoon,l read a book <<sometihng about love>>.actor named jimmy.This book is picture books with little words. This book is about :what is love?l think love is kind,love is patient .it does not envy,it does not boast,it is not proud,it is not rode.it is not easily angered;)do you think so ?
you can see this book. another book his write <<turn right to the left>>about love life . in night . l visit my friend .she is from Philippines .she is a teacher .togeher with realaxing time . we played games . we practiced english;) l want to say ":thank you "yes ,today is a nice day. l am looking forward to your reply;)

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    Can you alter my essay? Something about today, design class and my feeling;)

    Hi ,l am sweety;) Yes, below is my painting. Thank you for looking at it. l hope you can alter my essay ;)

    Today in the morning ,we had design class. Two students said that what best do they liked best about art. One student indroduced a artist named David Hockney. Do you know this man? He is a British artist,whose paintings are represented as <<Chris dov check, repair and tang》,<< flute and clark couple.>>[??????]. l like him because he reveals the secrets of the world famous paintings. Hockney chose at an early age to follow the development of pop art (Popart) Hamilton, pop art in the United States during its heyday in the 60's, represented by R. lichtenstein and A. warhol. Their art is characteristized by people's daily necessities, such as food and clothing live, as well as line drawing objects, using the method of physical collage, and environmental design. Objects are portrayed using delicate deformation, with the nature of advertisement design, shown with a  cold detached style.
    Another student mentioned Chinese painting - Shibamiao. Yes you probably do not know about hime;), but below you will see Chinese painting , undermy[?] painting.
    chine history is very long ,have very old special chlture..for example: tea.silk . brush.ceramic so on ,we have mang things to learn;).
    In the afternoon, l read a book <<sometihng about love>>, about an actor named Jimmy. This book is a picture book, with few words. This book is about the question of what love is.  I think love is kind,love is patient. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud, it is not rude. It is not easily angered;) Do you think so ?
    You can read this book. Another book he wrote  <<turn right to the left>> is about love life. That night, l visited my friend. She is from the Philippines. She is a teacher. Together we had a realaxing time. We played games. We practiced English;) l want to say "Thank you."  Yes ,today was a nice day. l am looking forward to your reply;)

     

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