My beautiful city

I live in Kharkov. I was born here and I've been living here all my life. It's a gorgeous place! It was a great industrial city formerly. Unfortunatly, it isn't really that way now. Kharkov has the largest shopping market in Eastern Ukraine. And it's awful! However, the city didn't become worse. This is a beautiful, developing city with nice squares, fountains, cosy public gardens, theaters and cafes. There are several city parks and a lot of other quiet places where people can rest, especially beautiful a center of Kharkov. There are a lot of historical properties and old buildings.
Three rivers run through the city. Although the water in these rivers aren't clean, they make the city more attractive. I like fishing. If the water was more clean I'd go to fishing in the city. It'll be great go to fishing by tram, but I fish outside the city still.
The most beautiful in my city are girls. They are so excellent, pretty and romantic. They look great! Especialy in spring. The spring sun shines and the first leaves appear on the trees. You understand it's spring, but girls feel it one-two weeks befor this day. They put on short skirts, light sweaters and walk along streets and you see that will be spring soon.

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