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Please Correct this paragraph and explain me why :) thanks

english paragraph: I started to send postcard 1 month ago when i signed up on postcrossing website.
My first postcards were sent to Netherland, Russia, Belarus and Thailand
I received so many postcards and stamps from different countries, i was so happy
Collecting Postcard is really a wonderful hobby
Korean paragraph: 나는 업서를 1개위에 시작하써 부내 언제 postcrossing 웹사이트 등록
나는 먼서 엽서는 netherland, russia, belarus과 thailand (Have been sent??)
나는 엽서 우표를 서로 다른부터 나라 수시났
나는 정말 행붇 이었나
엽서 수집 진짜 멋진 취미이나

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    Please Correct this paragraph and explain me why :) thanks

    english paragraph: I started to send postcard 1 month ago when i signed up on postcrossing website.
    My first postcards were sent to Netherland, Russia, Belarus and Thailand
    I received so many postcards and stamps from different countries, i was so happy
    Collecting Postcard is really a wonderful hobby
    Korean paragraph: 나는 업서를 1개위에 시작하써 부내 언제 postcrossing 웹사이트 등록

     

    나는 먼서 엽서는 netherland, russia, belarus과 thailand (Have been sent??)

    (나는 먼저 엽서를 네델란드. 러시아. 벨라루스.태국에 보냈다.)
    나는 엽서 우표를 서로 다른부터 나라 수시났

    (나는 많은 엽서들을  다른 나라 로부터 받았고 ,행복했다)
    나는 정말 행붇 이었나

    (엽서 수집.엽서 교환은 정말 환상적인 취미다.)
    엽서 수집 진짜 멋진 취미이나

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