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The Past Tense

Yesterday I walked in the mountain with my friends. I saw the valley from the top of the mountain after some hours of walk and it was amazing!
I was walking when I received a message on my cell phone. A friend was organizing a party but I was tired so I said no. Then I spoke over Skype for a short time and I slept.
It was a good day and now it's a good opportunity to practice the past tense in English!

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    The Past Tense

    Yesterday I walked in up the mountain with my friends. I saw the valley from the top of the mountain after some several hours of walking and it was amazing!
    I was walking While I was walking, when I received a message on my cell phone. A friend was organizing a party but I was tired so I said "no." Then I spoke over to him/her on Skype for a short time and I slept.
    It was a good day and now it's is a good opportunity time to practice the past tense in English!

     

     

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