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Lili is a lovely dog,she is very small but eats very much.She doesn't like a bath,so sometime Make me angry.When I ask her:''Lili,come on".She will come with me for a walk. I taught her sit dawn and up,if I say;"sit dawn,LIli".she did it,I gave her a piece of dog biscuits.I like LIli,I think she is like me too.

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    The dog

    Lili is a lovely dog,she is very small but eats very much.She doesn't like a bath,so sometime Make me angry.When I ask her:''Lili,come on".She will come with me for a walk. I taught her sit dawn and up,if I say;"sit dawn,LIli".she did it,I gave her a piece of dog biscuits.I like LIli,I think she is like me too.

     

    The Dog

    Lili is a lovely dog. She is very small but eats a lot (very much). She doesn't like being bathed which sometimes makes (a bath,so sometime Make) me angry.When I tell (ask) her:''Lili,come on", she (She) will come with me for a walk. I taught her to sit down (dawn) and stand up,if I say;"sit down (dawn) ,LIli".she will do (did) it. I gave her some (a piece of) dog biscuits.I like LIli and I think she likes (is like) me too!

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