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你今天做什么? (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)

我今天工作很忙了。 (I was very busy today at work!)
我一点伤心因为没有酒! 哈哈。
你呢?你今天做什么?忙不忙? (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)

I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!

谢谢!
Sean

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    你今天做(past perfect indication)什么?

    more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!

     

    我今天工作很忙(past perfect here, mind the difference)

    I was very busy today at work!


    一点伤心(有一点/有点儿 can be used as a phrase in a sentense, meaning "there's a little bit")因为今天(today)没有酒(to drink, sry don't know why but lack of indication of time and function just sounds a bit weird here xP)! 哈哈。


    你呢?你今天做什么?忙不忙?

    How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?


    Photo Comments: 

    mistake with 吃 (eat), minor structure problem with 以 (所以 so)

    Gotta say very cute handwriting sooo adorable! :) Well done well done!


    Hope it helps!

     

    你今天做什么? (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)

    你今天做什么?(What will you do today/what are you going to do today?)

    你今天做什么了?/你今天做了什么(事)?(What did yo do today?)

    我今天工作很忙了。 (I was very busy today at work!)

    我今天工作很忙。(I was very busy today at work.)

    我一点伤心因为没有酒! 哈哈。

    我有点儿伤心,因为今天没酒喝。哈哈。
    你呢?你今天做什么?忙不忙? (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)
    你呢?你今天做什么了?忙不忙?

    我下班后喜欢喝杯酒,最好用“喝点酒”

    你今天做什么?(你今天做什么?means what are you going to do ?/你今天做了什么?means what did you do today?) (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)

    我今天工作很忙(please don't add "了"here,if you want add "了",you must say "我今天的工作可忙了。") (I was very busy today at work!)
    我一点伤心因为没有酒!我有一点伤心,因为这里没有酒!哈哈。
    你呢?你今天做什么?忙不忙? (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)

    I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!

    谢谢!
    Sean

    你今天做什么? (more sentence and grammar practice, please correct!)

    我今天工作很忙。 (I was very busy today at work!)
    我有一点伤心因为没有酒! 哈哈。
    你呢?你今天做什么?忙不忙? (How about you? What did you do today? Were you busy?)

    I've also included a photo of some practice writing, please comment if I have written any characters incorrectly!

    谢谢!
    Sean

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