First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm from Korea. Actually In Korea, if i want to get a job that i want i have to speak english fluently. just like a canadian. When i was young, I just wanted to learn to speak English because at that time English looked very nice to me.
Very good job. Many countries speak English (not just Canada) so I took out "Canada".
(빨간색) Red = 대문자로 써주세요. Please use capitals.
(파란색) Blue = 정정 & 철자 Correction and Spelling
(녹색) Green = 더 자연스러운 방법 More natural way
(포라색) Purple = 내 생각에 / 코멘트 / 제안 My comment or suggestion
(밑줄) Underline = 구두점과 띄어쓰기 Punctuation &/or spacing
