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My name is Sylvia, I am a student and I live in Spain with my family. in a village. I want to learn english because i think that its necesary for work and travell,

I like swim, go to the cinema and go to te concerts. My favourite band is Stopa.... When i am sad I want walk for the sea but the sea is very cold in this place. I want travell but I think that now its imposible, fist i need pass my career and find a job

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    Hello: (!)

    My name is Sylvia, (and) I am a student(.) and I live (in a village) in Spain with my family. I want to learn (E)nglish because i (The personal pronoun I is always uppercased in English) think that its ("its" - is the possesive from of it -you want the "it's" from - "it's" is a contraction of "it is.") a neces(s)ary for work and travell (The word "travel" is spelled with a single "l.") (.)

    I like (to) swim, go to the cinema and go to t(h)e concerts. My favourite band is Stopa.... When i (same as above) am sad I want (to) walk for (to) the sea but the sea is (a) very cold in this place. I want (to) travell (same as above)(,) but I think that now its (it's) impo(s)sible, (because) fi(r)st i need (to) pass my career (finish my schooling/ finish my degree) and find a job.

     

    Hello!

    My name is Sylvia and I am a student. I live in a village in Spain with my family. I want to learn English because I think that it's necessary for work and travel. 

     

    I like to swim, go to the cinema and go to the concerts. My favourite band is Stopa. When I am sad I want to walk to the sea, but the sea is a very cold place. I want to travel, but I think that now it's impossible because first I need to finish my degree and find a job.

     

     

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