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What new skill would you like to learn?
I would like to learn how to swim. Now I can’t swim. So, this is a new skill for me. It would be a good skill to have because learning how to swim is an essential skill that anyone can do to stay safe in and around the water. Also, I could enjoy it and have fun. But the main reason is I have to learn it for emergency conditions.

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    would you please correct me?

    What new skill would you like to learn?
    I would like to learn how to swim. Now I can’t swim, so, this is a new skill for me. It would be a good skill to have because learning how to swim is an essential skill that anyone can do to stay safe in and around the water. I could also enjoy it and have fun, but the main reason is I have to learn it for emergency conditions.

     

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