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Today I was jogging by 29 degree Celsius.
Tomorrow it will become even more hotter.
It could become the hottest day in the German history.

Tomorrow morning I have to deliver the newspaper (every Sunday) and for that reason I will get out of bed early at the morning.
I need around 5 hours for insert the advertising in the newspaper and finally the delivering.

I didn't reported about my holidays until now.
I will report next weeks.

( I'm a bit lazy since the beginning of the summer holidays..)

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    hot days

    Today I was jogging and it was 29 degrees Celsius.
    Tomorrow it will become even hotter.
    It could become the hottest day in German history.

    Tomorrow morning I have to deliver the newspaper (every Sunday), and for that reason I will get out of bed early in the morning.
    I need around 5 hours to insert the advertisements into the newspaper, and there is also the delivering.

    I didn't report about my holidays until now.
    I will report next week.

    ( I'm a bit lazy since the beginning of the summer holidays.)

    Hot Days

    Today I was jogging by when it was 29 degrees Celsius.
    Tomorrow it will become even more hotter.
    It could become the hottest day in the German history.

    Tomorrow morning, just like every Sunday morning, I have to deliver the Sunday newspaper. (every Sunday) And for that reason, I will get out of bed early at in the morning.
    I need around 5 hours for inserting the advertising inserts into the newspapers and finally completing the deliveries.

    I didn't haven't yet (reported)/(written) about my holidays until now.
    I will (report)/(write) about this in the next few weeks. / (I will (report)/(write) about this next week.)

    ( I'm I've been a bit lazy since the beginning of the summer holidays..)

     

    hHot dDays

    Today I was jogging by 29 degree Celsius (Suggestion: 29 degree heat).
    Tomorrow it will become be even more hotter (Hotter is already comparative, you can't say more hotter. Hot, hotter, hottest.) .
    It could become (could be, may be )the hottest day in the German history.

    Tomorrow morning I have to deliver the newspaper like (every Sunday) and for that reason I will get out of bed early at the morning.
    I need around 5 hours for insert the advertising in the newspapers (Comment: I'm not sure what this is, but I'm no expert on newspaper delivery. Do you really have to put ads into the papers themselves?) and finally the delivering( Comment: this sounds a little odd though I understand what you're saying. Maybe and 'after that I have to deliver them').

    I didn't haven't reported (Comment: report also sounds a little formal which comes across as a bit odd. What about I still haven't written...) about my holidays until now .
    I will report (write about them) next weeks.

    ( I'm I've been a bit lazy since the beginning of the summer holidays..)

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