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Pets.Correct please.

 

I like other pets.
This are dogs, cats and parrots.
My favorite dogs are big breeds. There are Leonberger, Landsir, Tibetan mastiff ,Old English Mastiff and other kinds mastiffs.
I like them because they are very clever , very big dogs and with them very easy for me.
My favorites parrots are Australian and New Zealand parrots. I like Rozella ,Loricet, Korella and other parrots.
I want to bay one or two parrots Korellas. Because they are very funny ,very clever and very beautiful.
My favorite cat is Cat Van. They are very old breed cat around world they are very beautiful they are likes swimming .
My friends has kennel cat van in Armenia. There cats are expensive and very beautiful pets.
They are loves them very much.

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    Pets.Correct please.

    I like other(you could also say "uncommon") pets.
    This are (such as) dogs, cats and parrots.
    My favorite dogs are big breeds(you could also say "I prefer big dogs"). There are Leonberger, Landsir, Tibetan mastiff ,Old English Mastiff and other kinds mastiffs. 

    I like them because they are very clever(and) very big dogs are easyfor me.(too much use of the word "very")
    My favorites parrots are Australian and New Zealand parrots. I like Rozella ,Loricet, Korella, and other parrots.
    I want to buy one or two parrots, especially Korellas because they are very funny ,very clever and very beautiful. (Too much use of the word "very")
    My favorite cat is Cat Van. They are a very old cat breed around world. They are very beautiful and they like to go swimming .
    My friend has a kennel cat van in Armenia. These cats are expensive and are very beautiful pets.
    They(maybe you meant to say "I")love them very much.

     

    Pets.Correct please (Suggestion: Please correct. I think most native English speakers would place the word order this way round. It's funny because i think a lot of people who speak English as a second language would more naturally place the please after the verb).

    I like other pets (Comment: you can't really put the other here as you haven't mentioned any other pets yet).
    This are I like dogs, cats and parrots.
    My favorite dogs are big breeds. There are (Suggestion: for example/ like) Leonberger, Landsir, Tibetan mastiffs ,Old English Mastiffs and other kinds of mastiffs.
    I like them because they are very clever , very big dogs and with them very easy for me (Comment: This sounds a little odd. Maybe you mean I find them easy to handle?).
    My favorites parrots are Australian and New Zealand parrots. I like Rozellas ,Loricets, Korellas and other parrots.
    I want to bay buy one or two parrots Korellas (Suggestion: of Korella parrots) . Because they are very funny ,very clever and very beautiful.
    My favorite cat is Cat Van (Suggestion: Van breed of cat, possibly Van Cat but the former is probably better). They are very old breed of cat around world (Comment: not quite sure about the meaning here. Are you trying to say 'they are the oldest breed of cat in the world'?) . They are very beautiful they are likes and like swimming .
    My friends has kennel cat van (Suggestion: 'My friends breed Van cats' or My friends have a kennel that breeds Van cats'. I'm not expert on breeding cats but I think a kennel is for dogs and a cattery for cats) in Armenia. There cats are expensive and very beautiful pets (Suggestion: We also say 'they make very beautiful pets').
    They are loves love them very much.

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