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Have a nice day!

We have a family day!I am so excited!Because we go to barbecue!Although the weather is bad, but it didn't affect my mood!We have a lot of food to eat! We have chicken wings、beeves、fish、sweet corns and sweet potatoes!
I felt quite satisfied after my big meal.And then We go to ride the bicycle around the park!It's nice day!

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    Have a nice day!

    We hadve a family day! I was am so excited!B because we go to had a barbecue! Although the weather is was bad, but it didn't affect my mood! We have had a lot of food to eat! We have had chicken wings、beefves、fish、sweet corns and sweet potatoes!
    I felt quite satisfied after my big meal.And then we go to ride rode the bicycles around the park!It's was nice day!

     

    Coral, this was a really good effort - 太好了!!  Remember, in English we use past tense, which changes the way we say things.  We had something - past tense.  We are having something - current, like 我在.  And then there is we will have, future tense.

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