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My Essay 25
[With the help of your Chinese, I can better correct your English according to you original intent.]
Topic: People are happier feel greater satisfaction when they finished a difficult or challenging job than completed an easy task. when difficult and challenging tasks are completed than easy ones. [Your translation is correct but as a topic title, this would be a better way to express] I fully agree this point that people are happier when finished a challenging and difficult job. First of all, Everyone has an intense sense of identity fighting spirt, at least shown by many of my classmates have. A person always gets praises and identity from other people after finish a challenging and difficult job, that is a really great feeling. When some particularly tough assignment is completed, it is a great feeling to be praised by your peers. The next, the things many people seek to are often more challenging than normal things, of course to finish these things will bring a person huge happiness and inspiration. When many pursue their ideals, often they of a higher bar/standard. Of course, once realized, immeasurable joy and encouragment are added to their little jig of victory. For example, Many children long to be a pilot or an astronaut when they grow up. in the days to come, and there are also lots of So too, many adults want to get would like to rise a higher company position and in their companies, even some old people also the retired be able wish to take have long trips -distance travels or to travel around the world in their rest life before the inevitable. No matter Whether or not their dreams becomes reality, there is no question of the amount of happiness heaped upon them than completing mundane tasks. can be true at last, it’s obvious to see that to do such challenging things will get a huge happiness than just to do those normal, easy tasks. As for me, my dream is I want to go to enroll in the Phillips Andover Academy Andover for my high school. that is a soooooooo hard A most challenging for me since the school in China always Chinese students are given students so too much homework that the students have little time to do and not enough time for other things. To complete my study schedules For this kind of regiment, I had give sacrifice my summer travel plans up this summer. I have to devote all my leisure to study English and giving up my swimming even though this guarantees me no success to my dream. But I don’t feel depressed during the harsh study period, I am filled with a full of happiness of having a dream. I guess this is why I agree the point of the topic. Do I feel depressed? Hell no! It is the anticipation of the sweet smell of success that I concur with this topic statement.
As you can see, the level of the language used is far more advance. What you wrote is not incorrect. I have to raise the standard as you had done in your native tongue. For a kid like you, I don't think many age equivalent US kids can write as well. Great job!
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