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Yesterday evening I came home from my holiday by my oncle.

( They don't really have internet (right word?),
I had to run around to find a place to find connection to go online.

Today I spend my time with tidying up my room
and prepare my school things for school.

I'm not finish. Tomorrow I have to vacuum my rooms.

Now I will show the film "Englisch für Anfänger" and after that I will go sleep.
(Eventually I don't will show the whole film today because I I have to wake up early in the morning.)

Next week school will start :(
Last year :)

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    English for beginners

    Yesterday evening I came home from my holiday at my uncle's house(bei in German translates more to "at someone's place", I get confused as they look and sound like English "by") 

    They don't really have internet service, so
    I had to run around to find a place to find a connection to go online.

    Today I spent my time tidying up my room
    and preparing my school things for school.

    I'm not finished. Tomorrow I have to vacuum my room. 

    Now I will watch the film "Englisch für Anfänger", and after that I will go sleep.
     I won't watch the whole film today because I have to wake up early in the morning.

    Next week school will start :(
    It's my last year :)

    English for beginners

    Yesterday evening I came home from my holidayS by my oncle.

    ( They don't really have internet CONNECTION (right word?),
    I had to run around GO OUT to find a place to find that has internet.connection to go online.

    Today I spenTd my time with tidying up my room
    and prepareING my school things for THE NEXT WEEK school.

    I'm have not finishED YET. Tomorrow I have to vacuum? my rooms.

    Now I will show  watch the film "Englisch für Anfänger" and after that I will go TO sleep.
    (Eventually I don't will not watch show the whole film today because I I have to wake up early in the morning.)

    THE Next week IM GOING TO START school will start :(
     THIS IS MY Last year :)

     

    English for beginners

    Yesterday evening I came home from my holiday (say vacation in Am. English) by with my uncle.

    ( They don't really have internet (right word?), yes it's right :)
    I had to run around to find a place to find connection to go online.

    Today I spent my time with tidying up my room
    and preparing my school things for school.

    I'm not finished. Tomorrow I have to vacuum my rooms. (okay if you have more than one room)

    Now I will show watch the film "Englisch für Anfänger" and after that I will go sleep.
    (Eventually I don't will show watch the whole film, but not today because I I have to wake up early in the morning.)

    Next week school will start :(
    It's my Last year :)

     

    Good luck in your last year of school :)

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