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There is four persons in my family , my father ,my mother ,my little brother and me . My father and my mother are workers . They are go to facttory everyday from ever to now . So they can't play with me .Sometimes, I play with my little brother .We read books and play games each other .But we don't angry about our parents ,because they must earn money and support our family .We love them . We think they are the great persons .My little brother is very cute and naught .He usually pitch my face and say "why you have a round face?” Ofcourse ,I also pitch his face . I love him ,love my family .

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    There is are four persons [當然是人!]in my family, , my father, ,my mother,[You can say, "my parents] ,my little brother and me. . My father and my mother are factory workers. They are go to facttory work everyday from ever to now . So and so they can't cannot play with me. .Sometimes, I play with my little brother. We read books together and play games with each other. .But We don't are never angry about at our parents ,because as they must earn money and to support our family. .We love them . We think [你有疑惑他們不是最偉大的嗎] and they are the greatest. persons .My little brother is very cute and naughty.  He usually pitch pinches my face and say,

     

    "Why do you have a round face?”

     

    "Of course I do!" and ,I also pitch pinched his face back. I love him and love my family. .

    my family

    My Family


    There is are four persons people in my family: my father, my mother, my little brother and me. My father and my mother are workers. They are go to facttory the factory everyday from ever to now . So they can't play with me during the day. Sometimes, I play with my little brother. We read books and play games with each other. But we don't get angry about with our parents, because they must earn money and support our family. We love them. We think they are the great persons people. My little brother is very cute and naughty. He usually often pitch pinches my face and says "why do you have a round face?” Of course, I also pitch pinch his face. I love him, and love all my family.

     

    很好!- Andrew :)

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