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兄は優しい

 

最近、兄は私にファミコンを買ってあげました。私はこれが聞かないけど、店で兄からどんな色かと聞く電話がかかりました。

兄はとても優しいくれます。

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Recently, my brother bought me a new game system and game. I didn't ask him to, but he called me from the store asking what color I wanted.

He's very nice to me.

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    兄は優しい

    最近、兄は私にファミコンとゲームソフトを買ってくれあげました。私が何色がほしいこれが頼まなかった聞かなけど、店から兄はからどんな色がほしいと聞く電話をくれました。がかかりました


    兄はとても優ししてくれます

    Recently, my brother bought me a new game system and game. I didn't ask him to, but he called me from the store asking what color I wanted.
    He's very nice to me.

    Good job!  優しいお兄さんですね〜。うらやましいです! ^^

     

    Since i'm here, please correct me if I make a mistake.

    I didn't ask him to, but he called me from the store asking what color I wanted.

    Can I say the same meaning of that  “I would have liked to add that what color i wanted, but he called me from the store asking”  ?

     

    Thank you.

     

     

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