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A blind and a lame man's story

Once somewhere in a village there lived a blind man. One day that village caught a fire. All villagers/people ran away from village. In the same village there also lived a lame man. The blind man said to the lame man, “ you have eyes but u cant not walk. I have feets but I cannot see. Lets come and sit on my shoulder.. You show me path and I will walk. To do so will save both of us( is it also correct writing – Doing so we both will be saved)”. Both did the same and efficiently went out of the village.
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    A Story of a Blind Man and a Cripple lame man's story


    Once somewhere in a village there lived There was a blind man living in a village. One day that village caught a fire and all its inhabitants fled . All villagers/people ran away from village. In the same village there lived also lived cripple  lame man . The blind man said to the cripple lame man,

    You have eyes can see but you cant not cannot walk. I have feets can walk but I cannot see. Let's help each other.  come and Sit on my shoulder.. You show me path and I will walk and be my eyes for I shall be your legs!"

     

    To do so will save both of us( is it also correct writing – Doing so we both will be saved)”. Both did the same and efficiently went out of the village. 


    In the end, both were saved by helping each other.


    Please check it for correction also. Thanks.

    A blind and a lame man's story

    Once, somewhere in a village, there lived a blind man. One day that village caught a fire. All the villagers/people ran away from the village. In the same village there also lived a lame man. The blind man said to the lame man, “you have eyes but you can't not (use "cannot' or "can't") walk. I have feets but I cannot see. Lets Come and sit on my shoulder.. You show me the path and I will walk. To do so will save both of us( is it also correct writing – Doing so we both will be saved)” (you could use "To do so will save us both" or "Doing so will save both of us"). Both did the same and efficiently went out of the village. 

    Pls check it for correction also.

    [Good job!  There were minor problems with punctuation and forgetting to use "the" in some places, but I was able to read and understand it easily.]

     

    A blind and a lame man's story

    Once, somewhere in a village, there lived a blind man. One day that village caught a fire. All the villagers/people ran away from village. In the same village there also lived a lame man. The blind man said to the lame man, “You have eyes but you cannot walk. I have feet but I cannot see. Lets Come and sit on my shoulder.. You show me path and I will walk. To do so will save both of us ( is it also correct writing – Doing so we both will be saved)”. Both did the same and efficiently went out of the village.
    Pls check it for correction also.

     

    [Good work.  You could also say "Doing so, we both will be saved" (with the comma), but it is an old form and seldom used today.]

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