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Today I want to talk about swimming and all the reason issues that prevent me from swimming not to go. Well I started swimming just three month ago. One day my friend came up go to the swimming pool because his back hurts and the doctor recommended him to swimming, and I went with him. I liked it but we didn't hadn't signed up for the classes because it was in the afternoons and we work until 6 p.m. so we can only go there at night and on Sundays. The first month we went three times a week, and we practiced by ourselves, or sometimes other people taught us how to do that, and we did improve, but three weeks ago I resumed my English class in the evenings, so I don't have much time for go to swimming and only go just one or twice a week. I would like to have much more time to do things that I love.
Great job! "Just" and "only" are synonyms in this case, so they're redundant in your second-to-last sentence. Otherwise, very well written. Keep up the good work.
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