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say something to young mother

Lots of my freinds are young mothers now,
They changed their profile pictures to be their children,
Their notebooks are all about their boys and gilrs.
They run after their children to make them eat a little.
They want their children to learn music, drawing.....
Maybe I'll be one of them.
But, actually I dont want to be a mother who spoil her children.

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    say Something To Say to a Young Mother

    Lots Many of my freinds friends are young mothers now,
    They changed their profile pictures to be pictures of their children,
    Their notebooks are all about their boys and gilrs girls.
    They run after their children to make them eat a little.
    They want their children to learn music and how to drawing.....
    Maybe I'll be one of them.
    But, actually I dont want to be a mother who spoils her children.

     

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    say Something to Say to a Young Mother or "Something to Say to Young Mothers"

     

    Lots Many of my frieinds are young mothers now.
    They changed their profile pictures to be their children's; 
    Their notebooks are all about their boys and girlrs.
    They run after themir children to make them eat a little more.
    They want themir children to learn music, and to drawing.....
    Maybe Perhaps too, a young mother I'll shall be one of them.
    But, actually Nah! I dont want to be Not one/a mother/ who to spoil her children.

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