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Can you hear me ?

I dreamed last night .
I was playing with my nephew .(Actually i don't have a nephew )
Then my cellphone rang .I picked up the phone .It was my friend calling .
She asked me about my recent life just like an old friend .
We are old friend but she never called me since we graduated .
She talked about her job and her husband (Actually she doesn't have a husband .I don't know what happened to this dream, maybe i ate too much vegetable lately)
And I could hear her husband was yelling at her over there .
She did not finish what she trying to said , the phone was on hold .I kept saying "Can you hear me ,Can you hear me (你能听到吗)" but no answer .
And my nephew said "Can you hear that (你能听到吗),it 's raining outside "

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    Can you hear me ?

    I dreamed last night .
    I was playing with my nephew. (Actually i don't have a nephew )
    Then my cellphone rang. I picked up the phone. It was my friend calling .
    She asked me about my recent life, just like an old friend would.
    We are old friends but she has never called me since we graduated .
    She talked about her job and her husband (Actually she doesn't have a husband. I don't know what happened to this dream, maybe I have been eating too much vegetable lately)
    and I could hear her husband was yelling at her over there.
    She did not finish what she trying to say said, the phone was on hold. I kept saying "Can you hear me" "Can you hear me" (你能听到吗)" but no answer reply.
    And my nephew said "Can you hear that (你能听到吗),it 's raining outside "

     

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    Can you hear me ?

    I dreamed dreamt last night that I was playing with my nephew. (Actually I don't have a nephew )
    Then all of a sudden my cellphone rang. I picked up the phone. It was my friend calling .
    She asked me about my recent life, just like an old friend .
    We are old friends but she had never called me ever since we graduated .
    She talked about her job and her husband (Actually she doesn't have a husband. I don't know what happened to this dream dreamt this; maybe I ate too much too many vegetables lately)
    And I could hear her husband was yelling at her over there .
    She did not finish what she was trying to said say as the phone was on hold. I kept saying "Can you hear me ,Can you hear me?" (你能听到吗)" but no answer .
    And Then, my nephew said "Can you hear that (你能听到吗),it 's raining outside"

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