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my farsi poem

.یک شب خیلی تیره آن بود. باران در همه جا بود. بله باران را آنجا بود ولی آن یک شب خیلی قشنگ بود! تیره و باران به من خوشحال

This is what I tried to write - It was a very dark night. There was rain everywhere. Yes there was rain but it was a very beautiful night. The darkness and the rain made me happy.


This is what I wanted to write if I knew more Farsi - It was a dark and rainy night. Yes there was a lot of rain but it was still very beautiful. The darkness and the rain made me happy.

I would be very grateful if you corrected my original sentence and also told me how I could write the sentence I want to. Mersiiii!!!!

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    my farsi poem

    .  آن یک شب خیلی تاریکی بود. باران همه جا می بارید. بله باران آنجا می بارید ولی آن یک شب خیلی قشنگ بود! تاریکی و باران مرا   
    خوشحال کرده بود
    This is what I tried to write - It was a very dark night. There was rain everywhere. Yes there was rain but it was a very beautiful night. The darkness and the rain made me happy.


    This is what I wanted to write if I knew more Farsi - It was a dark and rainy night. Yes there was a lot of rain but it was still very beautiful. The darkness and the rain made me happy.

    I would be very grateful if you corrected my original sentence and also told me how I could write the sentence I want to. Mersiiii!!!!

     

    my farsi poem

    .یک شب خیلی تیره و تاریکی آن بود. باران  می بارید در همه جا بود. بله باران را آنجا بود ولی با وجود بارش باران آن یک شب خیلی قشنگی بود! تیره تاریکی شب و باران من را  خوشحال می کند به من خوشحال

    This is what I tried to write - It was a very dark night. There was rain everywhere. Yes there was rain but it was a very beautiful night. The darkness and the rain made me happy.


    This is what I wanted to write if I knew more Farsi - It was a dark and rainy night. Yes there was a lot of rain but it was still very beautiful. The darkness and the rain made me happy.

    I would be very grateful if you corrected my original sentence and also told me how I could write the sentence I want to. Mersiiii!!!!

     

     

    ** شب بارانی و تاریکی بود. با وجود انکه باران شدیدی می بارید ولی هنوز هم زیبایی منحصر به فردی داشت. باران و تاریکی شب مرا شاد می کنند.

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