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Some people prefe to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
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An apartment or a house, different people make different choice.
As a single person like me, do not have much incoming money, probably would prefer live in an apartment. Frist of all, not only the rent of an apartment is cheaper, and the space is smaller as well. Which means I do not need put a lot of effort on housework. Personally I hate doing housework, and I suppose most people does not like to do it. Second, it is quite conveninet for security, people live in an apartment only have to keep their door key, do not need to think about back door or garden.
Some people who like gardening would prefer live in a house. In that case they can design their own garden, especially for those people would like to keep a pet, such as a dog, so that it can run around the garden. Also a house is fitter for a family, there are more rooms and space than an apartment. Of course if you have a car, a house is quite right for you, so you can have your own garage.
It is not easy to say which one is more advantage than the other one, in my opinion it depends on different live style. To tell the truth, in China, most people can not afford a house, it is like only rich people live in there. So, it is pretty much people do not have choice but live in an apartment.

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    An apartment or a house, different people make different choice(s).

    As a single person like me, do not (who doesn't) have much incom(e)ing money, probably would prefer (to) live in an apartment. Frist (First) of all, not only (is) the rent of an apartment is cheaper, and the space is smaller as well. Which means I do not need (to) put a lot of effort on (into) housework. Personally I hate doing housework, and I suppose most people does not (don't) like to do it. Second, it is quite conveninet (convenient) for security, people (who) live in an apartment only have to keep their door key (the key to their door), do not (they don't) need to think about (a) back door or garden.
    Some people who like gardening would prefer (to) live in a house. In that case they can design their own garden, especially for those people (who) would like to keep a pet, such as a dog, so that it can run around the garden. Also a house is fitter (a better fit) for a family, there are more rooms and space than an apartment. Of course if you have a car, a house is quite right for you, so you can have your own garage.
    It is not easy to say which one is more advantage (advantageous) than the other one, in my opinion it depends on different live style (lifestyles) . To tell the truth, in China, most people can not afford a house, it is like only rich people live in there(that live in houses). So, it is pretty much people do not have choice but (to) live in an apartment.

     

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    Some people prefe to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
    Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
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    Whether an apartment or a house, different people make different choices.
    As A single person like me, do not having much income/money, probably would prefer to live in an apartment. Frist of all, not only is the rent of an apartment is cheaper, but the space is smaller as well. Which means I do not need put a lot of effort on housework. Personally I hate doing housework, and I suppose most people does not like to do it. Second, it is great for security. people who live in an apartment only have to keep their door key and do not need to think about the back door or garden.
    Some people who like gardening would prefer live in a house. In this case, they can design their own garden.This is especially convenient for those people would like to keep a pet, such as a dog, so that it can run around the garden. Also a house is more fit for a family, as there are more rooms and space than an apartment. Of course if you have a car, a house is quite right for you, so you can have your own garage.
    It is not easy to say which one is more advantage than the other one; in my opinion it depends on different lifestyles. To tell [you]the truth, in China, most people can not afford a house, as it is like only rich people live in there. So, it is pretty much people pretty much do not have no choice but to live in an apartment.

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