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Do you remember my hat?

 

Hello, my friend!
Do you remember our first meeting?
I was walking down the street among pedestrians.
But suddenly a strong wind blew and he tore my hat.
The hat spun and flew.
Several passers-by ran after her.
But you caught up with her first!
You handed me my hat, our hands and eyes met ...

Say hello to Grandpa
Take care of yourself.
Olga

Beautiful women of the 20th century Retro On your porch
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgjNH79nzto

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    Do you remember my hat?

    Hello, my friend!
    Do you remember our first meeting?
    I was walking down the street among pedestrians.
    But suddenly a strong wind blew and he tore away my hat. (scans better)
    The hat spun and flew.
    Several passers-by ran after her.
    But you caught up with her first!
    You handed me my hat, our hands and eyes met ...

    Say hello to Grandpa
    Take care of yourself.
    Olga

    Beautiful women of the 20th century Retro On your porch
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgjNH79nzto

    Do you remember my hat?

    Hello, my friend!
    Do you remember our first meeting?
    I was walking down the street among the many passers-by.  pedestrians.  Then But when suddenly, a strong gust of wind blew and he tore my hat launched into the air. The hat It spun and danced freely in freedom.   flew. Several passers-by ran after her.  Many chased after it... But you were the first to catch itught up with her first! You handed me back my hat. Our hands touched and our eyes met... ...

     

    Very lovely imagery!


    Say hello to Grandpa
    Take care of yourself.
    Olga

    Beautiful women of the 20th century Retro On your porch
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgjNH79nzto

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