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I returned from my trip with my family. We were in Pichilemu, a city where you can surf, riding on horses, or enjoy parties. With my family we ate barbecue, meat, seafood and cheese empanadas in 4 days celebrating our National Parties. During night we visited Pichilemu Center, we saw some fair with craft (or handicraft, please correct me), some stores that they sell fast food like fried potatoes, hot dogs, empanadas and pizza.

On summer there are many tourist from different part of the world: American, Australian, Brazilian and European.

Finally, I must confess I am fat, I ate a lot in these days :(

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    I am back

    I returned from my trip with my family. We were in Pichilemu, a city where you can surf, riding on ride horses, or enjoy parties. With My family and I we ate barbecue, meat, seafood and cheese empanadas in during 4 days celebrating our national holidays Parties. During At night we visited Pichilemu Center, where we saw went to some fairs with that had crafts (or handicrafts, please correct me), and some stores that where they sell were selling fast food, like fried potatoes, hot dogs, empanadas and pizza.

    On In summer there are many tourists from different parts of the world: there are Americans, Australians, Brazilians and Europeans.

    Finally, I must confess that I am fat. I ate a lot in these those days :(

     

    I am back

    I returned from my trip with my family. We were in Pichilemu, a city where you can surf, riding on horses go horseback riding, or enjoy parties. With My family we ate barbecued meat, seafood and cheese empanadas in over the course of 4 days celebrating our National Holidays(?)Parties. During the nights we visited Pichilemu Center, we saw some fairs with crafts (or handicrafts, please correct me), and some stores that they sell fast food like fried potatoes, hot dogs, empanadas and pizza.

    On In the summer there are many tourists from different parts of the world: Americans, Australians, Brazilians and Europeans.

    Finally, I must confess I am fat, because I ate a lot in these days :(

     

    Nicely done. "Handicrafts" and "crafts" are both fine. 

    I am back

    I returned from my a trip with my family. We were in Pichilemu, a city where you can surf, riding on ride horses, or enjoy parties party. With my My family and I we ate had a barbecue. We ate meat, seafood and cheese empanadas in the 4 days celebrating our National holidayParties. During the night we visited Pichilemu Center, we saw some fair a fair with arts and crafts (or handicraft, please correct me), some stores that they sell fast food; like fried potatoes, hot dogs, empanadas and pizza.

    On In summer there are many tourist from different part of the world: American, Australian, Brazilian and European who visit Pichilemu. 

    Finally, I must confess I am fatbecause I ate a lot in these days :(

    Muy bien Alberto!  

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