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Now,are you sleep

Now China is late at night.I well go to sleep.But i am want not sleep.

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    Now,are you sleep

    Now China is late at night.I well go to sleep.But i am want not sleep.


    Are you asleep now?

    (You are using Chinese word order here.  In English we usually put the "time" at the end of the sentence.)


    It's very late in China now.

    (Instead of "at night", I think it is more natural just to say "it's very late."  Again, I think you are using Chinese sentence structure here.)


    I will go to sleep, but I do not want to sleep.

    (Remember to capitalize the pronoun "I".) 


    不错!加油!




     

    Now Are you asleep now? [This could also be written as a statement: Now you are sleeping. ]

    Right now, in China, it is late at night.I well will go to sleep.But I am do not want to not sleep.

     

    Without all the editing marks:

    Are y ou asleep now?
    Right now, in China, it is late at night. I will go to sleep. But I do not want to sleep.

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