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私の今日

今日は変でした。天気は雲。小さい悲しい。長い眠りたかった。人たちはイライラしました。WOWを遊びます。自由時間はすばらしい!行きます。じゃね。

My Day

Today was weird. It was cloudy. I felt down. I wanted to sleep longer. People were frustrating. I'm going to play WOW. Free time is great! I'm going. Cya.

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    私の今日 (or 私の一日)

    今日は変でした (or 変な日でした)。天気は雲すこし小さい悲しいかったですもっと()眠りたかったです人たちは(better 人々は or みんな) イライラしていました。WOW遊びます。自由時間はすばらしいです行きます。(In this case, I think it's natural to say ではまた or if you were going to somewhere, for example, go to the school or office, you can say いってきます。)じゃね。 


    My Day

    Today was weird. It was cloudy. I felt down. I wanted to sleep longer. People were frustrating. I'm going to play WOW. Free time is great! I'm going. Cya.

     

     

    Good job! One small thing, it's better not to mix up the formal way to say and the informal one in writing. Please enjoy learning, I hope this was helpful. 

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