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Nightmare before Christmas 第二段. 请改一下 : )

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Black cats jumped in and out of trash cans.
Black birds flew through the dark sky with loud, high cries.
And Jack Skellington sang his scary songs and danced his dangerous dances.
People screamed. They were afraid.
They loved it.

黑猫从垃圾桶跳上跳下.
飞越黑暗的天空的黑鸟发出不好受的鸣.
骨骼杰克一边唱让人害怕的歌一边跳险恶的舞.
人们惊叫.
他们都爱被吓一跳.

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    Nightmare before Christmas 第二段. 请改一下 : )

    I attach both original text and the translated one.
    Please pay attention to and correct only the Chinese text.
    Source text may be helpful if something I've written in Chinese is completely incomprehensible.

    Black cats jumped in and out of trash cans.
    Black birds flew through the dark sky with loud, high cries.
    And Jack Skellington sang his scary songs and danced his dangerous dances.
    People screamed. They were afraid.
    They loved it.

    黑猫从垃圾桶跳上跳下. 黑猫在垃圾桶那蹿进蹿出
    飞越黑暗的天空的黑鸟发出不好受的鸣.   黑鸟发出响亮的悲鸣穿越黑暗的天空
    骨骼杰克一边唱让人害怕的歌一边跳险恶的舞.   骷髅杰克唱着恐怖的歌曲,跳着危险的舞步。
    人们惊叫.               人们尖叫着。他们害怕极了。
    他们都爱被吓一跳.      他们却也乐此不疲。

     

    Nightmare before Christmas 第二段. 请改一下 : )

    I attach both original text and the translated one.
    Please pay attention to and correct only the Chinese text.
    Source text may be helpful if something I've written in Chinese is completely incomprehensible.

    Black cats jumped in and out of trash cans.
    Black birds flew through the dark sky with loud, high cries.
    And Jack Skellington sang his scary songs and danced his dangerous dances.
    People screamed. They were afraid.
    They loved it.

    黑猫从垃圾桶跳上跳下.
    飞越黑暗的天空的黑鸟发出不好受的鸣.(发出悲鸣阵阵)
    骨骼杰克一边唱让人害怕的歌一边跳险恶的舞. (惊悚)
    人们惊叫. (人们恐惧)
    他们都爱被吓一跳.(他们乐此不疲)

    I am a big fan of Burton

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