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today has sunrised with rain in bilbao, i have gone to the office and i have eat in teh office, today i havent gone to my flat for eat, and know at six o clock im going to the hospital to visit a friend that has give birth a boy!!!

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    Monday

    today the sun rose to has sunrised with rain in (or 'the sunrise was accompanied by rain in') Bilbao, I have gone went (simply past tense, not past perfect) to the office and i have eat ate in the office, today I havent gone didn't go back to my flat for to eat, and know knowing that at six o clock im I would be/ I will be going to the hospital to visit a friend that who has given birth to a boy!!!

    Monday

    Today has started with rain in bilbao (I like "sunrised" but we don't use it in English - perhaps you could say today the sun rose with rain), I went to the office and I ate there.  Today i havenit gone to my flat to eat, and know at six o clock I'm going to the hospital to visit a friend that has given birth a boy!!!

     

    Bien hecho y espero que tu amiga y su hijo estan bien :)

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