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Globalization Time

After internet, we all have access to information around the world.
Know about anything that we want.
But sometimes many information are wrong or distorted.
How can we judge if that information is true or not?
The lie or urban legend propagate faster than the truth.
The ignorance is the greatest oxidizing because blind us.
Know and meet other people makes us understand why some primitive actions and other inhumane occur.
Do not give reason to these attitudes but deprive myself the right to respect beliefs and values​​.
The globalized world shocks me, but also fascinates me!

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    Globalization Time

    After Since the creation of the internet, we all have access to information around the world.
    K We can know about anything that we want.
    But sometimes many much of the information are is wrong or distorted.
    How can we judge if that information is true or not?
    The lie or urban legend propagates faster than the truth.

    The i Ignorance is the greatest oxidizing because blind us.*
    Knowing and meeting other people makes us understand why some primitive actions and other inhumane ones occur. (ou: "why some primitive and inhumane acts occur.")
    Do not give reason to these attitudes but deprive myself the right to respect beliefs and values.* 
    The globalized world shocks me, but also fascinates me!

     

    Olá Monica! Texto muito bom e concordo plenamente! 

    'Information' é incontável em inglês, assim não pode ser usado com 'many'. 


    Substantivos abstratos, como "ignorance" quase nunca tem o 'the' em inglês. Escrevi um pouco mais sobre isso aqui: http://www.italki.com/entry/376559

    Para as duas frases que marquei com *, não estou com certeza que entendo o que a senhora está querendo dizer, assim não tentei corrigir. Se escrever aqui em português, talvez eu possa ajudar corrigi-las melhor...

    Abraço! 

    Globalization Time

    After introducing internet, we all have access to information around the world.
    We Know about anything that we want to.
    But sometimes many information are wrong or distorted.
    How can we judge if that information is true or not?
    The lie or urban legend propagate faster than the truth.
    The ignorance is the greatest (oxidizing?) because it makes us blind us.
    Knowing  and meeting  other people makes us understanding  why some primitive actions and other inhumane acts occur.
    I do not give reasons to these issues (attitudes) but I deprive myself of the right to judge (respect) beliefs and values.
    The globalized world shocks me, but also fascinates me!

    N.B. I am not a language professor and my corrections could be poor.

    K.

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