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Fall in love

I think I fell in love and it hurts.
My heart fell pain from last times when it was broken
And soul still has laceration( don't know is it correct word or no)

And I wanna hold her in my arms and never let go.
Is it love I don't know.
But something happens in my soul today and it it hurts so much.

But I feel happy because I think she love me too

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    Fall in love

    I think I fell in love and it hurts.
    My heart fell pain hurts from the last times when it was broken
    And my soul still has a gash laceration( don't know is it correct word or no)

    And I wanna hold her in my arms and never let go.
    Is it love? I don't know.
    But something happens happened [or "is happening"] in my soul today and it it hurts so much.

    But I feel happy because I think she love me too

     

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    Interesting poem! These are hard to correct because regular grammar rules often get thrown out the window in poetry. I just changed the bare minimum, removing anything that would sound strange to a native English speaker. 

    "Laceration" is quite a technical word - you generally only hear it from doctors, nurses, paramedics, etc in a formal medical setting. I replaced it with "gash", but it could be replaced with other things: "my soul is still torn", "my soul is still scarred", or something like that (even maybe "my soul is still bleeding"?). You are the poet!

     

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