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Too lazy to anger(be bothered)
My friend Sally, told me an amusing thing about(/that had happened to) Helen.One day(/the other day), they attended a class(/course) of(/in) C programming (language) which was so boring that it made Helen (feel) restless(/...that left Helen restless). To Sally’s surprise, she found(/noticed) (that) the color of her friend’s(/friend Helen's: might get confused by the friend of a friend's problem) hands turned to be(/turned into a) light purple. Sally’s boyfriend is very funny as well, once they had a (severe)(/serious) quarrel in the morning. Unexpectedly(/unfortunately/intriguingly), lots of acne (spots) were dotted with all over his face when they met again in the afternoon.
(/..his face was all covered in acne when....)
(Intriguingly, when they met again, his face had turned into an acne battlefield..;P) By the way, I am just too lazy to be(/become/get) angry. The(/My) energy is limited. (however)(In any case), too much stuff awaits me to deal with.(/there's too much stuff already to deal with). (Moreover)(/Besides), I need to make(/discover) something new everyday, for example, find a new book or some new ideas.(I feel the urge to discover new things everyday, find a good book, explore new ideas.)
Actually i even prefer a few of jeff's suggestions to mineown.. but you missed one or two things.. aswell i me, I guess;P Perhaps, somebody else should combine the two of our corrections....how about you, Grace;p
Too Lazy to be Angry
My friend Sally, told me a amusing thing story about Helen. One day, they attended a class of C programming language class that which was so boring that made Helen became very restless. To Sally’s surprise, she found saw the color of her friend’s hands had turned to be a light purple! Sally’s boyfriend is very funny too. as well, Once they had a severe big quarrel in the morning. unexpectedly, lots To our surprise, tons of acne were dotted with in his face while they met again later in the afternoon. [Here's a description for you to learn... "... of acne popped out all over his face like mushrooms/popcorn ...] By the Anyway, I'm am just too lazy to be angry. The My energy is limited, however, too much stuff awaits for me to deal with. Moreover, I need to make something new have better things to do everyday, for example, such as finding a new book or some new ideas.
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