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You life once , please correct my wrong sentences

You life once,
I believe thats good...
Because if something last to long
Become's it bored ,
I believe there's a second world upside...
Where everyone nice and sweet... !!

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    You life once , please correct my wrong sentences

    You live once,
    I believe that's good...
    Because if something lasts too long
    It becomes boring,
    I believe there's a second world outside...
    Where everyone nice and sweet... !!

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