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Learning to write in French by translating (Nine).

Le joueur de basket-ball a eu un accident. Il joue au basket. Il saute au-dessus du panier. Il jette la balle à travers le panier. Mais il ne retourne pas par terre. Il est en train de tenir le panier. Il y a un problème. La colonne avec le panier commence à se mouvoir. Elle tomb. Il tient encore. Il tomb. Le panier tomb près de lui. C'est choquant. Il est blessé, mais ce n'est pas grave. Des docteurs lui aident.

A basketball player has an accident. He is playing basketball. He jumps above the basket. He throws the ball through the basket. But he doesn’t get back to the ground. The player is holding the basket. There is a problem. The pole with the basket starts to move. It falls down. He is still holding. He falls down. The basket falls close to him. It is shocking. He is injured, but it is not serious. Doctors help him.
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    Learning to write in French by translating (Nine).

    Le joueur de basket-ball a eu un accident. Il joue au basket. Il saute au-dessus du panier. Il lance la balle à travers le panier. Mais il ne retourne pas par terre (il ne redescend pas). Il est accroché (suspendu) au panier. Il y a un problème. La (colonne) poteau du panier commence à se mouvoir, puis tombe. Il s'aggrippe encore. Il tombe. Le panier tombe près de lui. C'est choquant (Tout le monde est sous le choc). Il est blessé, mais ce n'est pas grave. Des docteurs l'aident. 

    A basketball player has an accident. He is playing basketball. He jumps above the basket. He throws the ball through the basket. But he doesn’t get back to the ground. The player is holding the basket. There is a problem. The pole with the basket starts to move. It falls down. He is still holding. He falls down. The basket falls close to him. It is shocking. He is injured, but it is not serious. Doctors help him.
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