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I went to pet shop with my mother and dog to buy tropical fish.

I don't know the name of the fish.
But the face looks like Axolotl.

It's so cute , so I want to get one. However, the shop doesn't have it.

When I look around the shop, I saw some snakes and felt very bad.

I don't like snakes ,but my mother is OK

because she grew in coutry side.

She watched and said "oh it's small.I'm ok. "

Then, we bought clothes for my dog.

My dog is 'sheltie'.

'sheltie 'is not bigger than Collie,but our dog isn't.

Her weight is about 19kg.

We walk the dog 3 times in a day but she is really fat.

And she likes to sleep in KOTATSU.

She looks like cats.

Is there anybody keeps a sheltie?
Is she or he smaller?

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    nothing specil

    I went to pet shop with my mother and dog to buy tropical fish.

    I don't know the name of the fish.
    But the face looks like Axolotl.

    It's so cute , so I want to get one. However, the shop doesn't have it.

    When I look around the shop, I saw some snakes and felt very bad.
    you need to write a sentence in a single tense no two at the same time
    I don't like snakes ,but my mother is OK with them

    because she grew up in coutry side.

    She looked at it and said "oh it's small.it's ok. "

    Then, we bought clothes for my dog.

    My dog is 'sheltie'.

    'sheltie 'is not bigger than Collie,but our dog isn't.
    this sentence is wrong

    Her weight is about 19kg.

    We walk the dog 3 times in a day but she is really fat.

    And she likes to sleep in KOTATSU.

    She looks like cats.

    Is there anybody that keeps a sheltie?
    Is she or he smaller?

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