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First notebook entry: Introducing myself my name is Amily .I like the movies, listen to songs and Painting.I am very pleased to be here.I hope everyone can learn from each other.
Nov 20, 2010 5:49 AM
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Amily .I like the movies, listen to songs and Painting.I am very pleased to be here.I hope everyone can learn from each other.

I like the movies, listen to songs and Painting

Should be:
I like watching movies, listening to songs, and painting.

:)

November 20, 2010

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

mMy name is Amily . I like the watching movies, listening to songs and Ppainting. I am very pleased happy to be here. I hope everyone here can learn from each other.

 

Try to add space before start of each sentence and after commas.

 



April 1, 2015

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Amily .I like the watching movies, listening to songs and Painting.I am very pleased to be here.I hope everyone can learn from each other.


March 31, 2015
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