Robert
IF I WERE A SUPERHERO, WHAT WOULD BE MY KRYPTONITE? If I could chose to be a superhero I would undoubtedly chose Superman. This is my favourite superhero. He has lots of superpowers. He can fly, he is really strong, he has super hearing and also has x-ray vision. His only weakness is kryptonite. There are many other superheroes, but in my opinion they aren’t that good. For instance, I find Batman relatively “normal”, I consider that his abilities depend more on his wealth rather than on his real powers. That said, Batman’s weakness would be poverty. But, what would it be my kryptonite? If I were a superhero, I think my weakness would be my constant worry about things and about others. I would probably try to help everybody neglecting, in some way, my well-being. As I grow-up I’m becoming more and more assertive, but having the ability to super hear other people crying for help from miles away, it would be really unbearable. This reminds me of Daredevil. This superhero had to sleep in an isolated hermetically sealed bathtub so he wouldn’t listen to what was happening in the rest of the world. However, as the Spiderman’s uncle said, with great power comes great responsibility. This being said, I consider that it would be great to be a superhero, but if I had super hearing powers like Superman, I would be left with two options: I would have to learn to be more assertive and a little bit selfish or I would have to buy really good super earplugs.
Mar 3, 2014 7:59 PM
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IF I WERE A SUPERHERO, WHAT WOULD BE MY KRYPTONITE?

If I could chose (choose) to be a superhero I would undoubtedly chose (choose) Superman. This (He; this should not be used to describe people) is my favourite superhero. He has lots of superpowers. He can fly, he is really strong, he has super hearing and also has x-ray vision. His only weakness is kryptonite. (He can fly, is really strong, has super hearing and also has x-ray vision; you don't have to keep on repeating him/her/it's when you are listing qualities with commas). There are many other superheroes, but in my opinion they aren’t that (as) good. For instance, I find Batman relatively “normal” (.) (His) abilities depend more on his wealth rather than on (any) real powers. That said, Batman’s weakness would be poverty.

But, what would be my kryptonite?

If I were a superhero I think my weakness would be my constant worry about things and others. I would probably try to help everybody (neglecting my own well-being). As I grow-up I’m becoming more and more assertive, but having the ability to super hear other people crying for help from miles away, it would be really unbearable. (But the enhanced ability to hear would make me hear other people crying for help from faraway. This realization would be very unbrearable)
This reminds me of Daredevil. This superhero had to sleep in an isolated hermetically sealed bathtub so he wouldn’t listen to what was happening in the rest of the world.
However, as (the; no need for an article here) Spiderman’s uncle said, with great power comes great responsibility.

This being said, I (think/believe) that it would be great to be a superhero. (However) if I had super hearing powers like Superman, I would be left with two options: I would have to learn to be more assertive and a little bit selfish or I would have to buy really good super (no need for two positive adjectives) earplugs.

March 14, 2014

IF I WERE A SUPERHERO, WHAT WOULD BE MY KRYPTONITE?

If I could chose to be a superhero I would undoubtedly choose Superman. This is my favourite superhero. He has lots of superpowers. He can fly, he is really strong, he has super hearing and he also has x-ray vision. His only weakness is kryptonite.
There are many other superheroes, but in my opinion they aren’t that good. For instance, I find Batman relatively “normal”, I consider that his abilities depend more on his wealth rather than on his real powers. That being said, Batman’s weakness would be poverty.

But, what would it be my kryptonite?

If I were a superhero, I think my weakness would be my constant worrying about things and about others. I would probably try to help everybody neglecting, in some way, my well-being. As I grow-up I’m becoming more and more assertive, but having the ability to super hear other people crying for help from miles away, it would be really unbearable.
This reminds me of Daredevil. This superhero had to sleep in an isolated hermetically sealed bathtub so he wouldn’t listen to what was happening in the rest of the world.
However, as the Spiderman’s uncle said, with great power comes great responsibility.

This being said, I consider that it would be great to be a superhero,.  But if I had super hearing powers like Superman, I would be left with two options: I would have to learn to be more assertive and a little bit selfish or I would have to buy really good super earplugs.

September 18, 2014
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March 4, 2014
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