satomi
I've got flu I've got flu:( I was almost dying last night. I had a fever for the first time in 10years. I don't have any appetite. But I feel a little better now. I can't go to work, I can't go out, so I will watch some dramas.
Mar 16, 2014 9:30 AM
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I've got (1)the flu

I've got the flu. :( I was almost dying last night. I had a fever for the first time in (2)ten years.
I don't have any appetite (3), but I feel a little better now.
I can't go to work, I can't go out, so I will (4)just watch some dramas.

 

1. "Flu" is always followed by "the" or "a". "cold" is different though, it is always followed by "a". This is strange, but it is just how English is spoken.  Examples: I've got a cold. I have the flu.

2. Numbers -- spell out any one word number. Examples: one, two, 100, ten, 22, seven, twenty, 35, 1378.

3. Sentences rarely begin with conjunctions. Split your sentence with a comma instead.

4. Since you can't do the other things you'd like to do, use "just". It sounds better.

March 16, 2014
How are you now?
April 23, 2014
we can make friends with each other,welcome to our city xiamen
April 17, 2014
take care friend..take some rest and medicine..get well soon :)
March 16, 2014
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