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Last summer, I and my family has had a short vacation in Da Nang. We spent all a night for (on) preparing everything.Especially me, because of my the first trip, I was totally worried and excited. When I came Da Nang city my parents picked took us to some famous places in there.I and my two brothers went to zoo. Really I have ever already been to the zoo, so did have them my brothers.So we went to around the zoo many times to (enjoying all animals) ( This sentence isn't clear, you can use " to see the animals more clearly") I was impressed by the tigers, it they seemed not only unfriendly but also arrogance, but I liked his their appatite (this word seems non-existent) eyes which were looked looking at me. My brothers was were backward, they liked giraffes and be were afraid of tigers. We were visited others places and stayed overnight in a hotel near the beach. What an exciting trip!
I'm Vietnamese so I am not sure whether my correction is true or false. But I hope it can help you! GOOD LUCK!
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