About me
I was born in Yancheng Jiangsu province in Feb 16,1991.
I studied college from 2010 up to 2014. in Nanjing ,the capital of Jiangsu province.
Now, I am an intern at SOFTLINK in Shenzhen Guangdong province.
I will go back to Nanjing next month to finish college life.
After two months or more, I will come back to Shenzhen to go on my job!
About me
I was born in Yancheng Jiangsu province in Feb 16,1991.
I study at a coellge in Nanjing ,the capital of Jiangsu province I am in the class of 2014.
Now (This is correct but you can also say "Right now," or "For the time being.") I am an intern at SOFTLINK in Shenzhen Guangdong province.
I will go back to Nanjing next month. To finish up my college life.
After two months or five months, I will come back to Shenzhen. Lots of work to do~~ working hard!!
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