Crista
After graduating from university I will graduate from school this June. And become an official employee in a cram school as a Chinese teacher there. Actually,I have worked for almost four years at that cram school. I am thinking about what I should map out before I graduate from the school. Now, I have some plans : First,I am compiling a magazine. Second,I want to find a yoga studio to continue with the practice and also doing some aerobics exercise. Third,I will do my best to level up my English and Japanese's capability. Except these two, I love to learn some different languages. These are my plans for recently.
Apr 7, 2014 2:10 PM
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After graduating from university

I will graduate from school this June, and become an official employee in a cram school as a Chinese teacher there. [1]
Actually, I have worked for almost four years at that cram school.
I am thinking about what I should map out before I graduate from the school.
Now, I have some plans :
First,I am compiling a magazine.
Second,I want to find a yoga studio to continue with the practice and also doing some aerobics exercise practicing and doing aerobics. [2]
Third, I will do my best to level up / improve my English and Japanese's capability.
ExceptIn addition/Besides these two, I would love to learn some different languages. [3]
These are my plans for recently.

 

1. You have to have a subject in your sentence. Otherwise it is a run on sentence.

2. Doing is a noun (名詞)http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/doing。You can also say I want to find a yoga studio to continue with the practice and also do some aerobics。

3.你好像在這裏想用的結構“除了...以外”。我覺得你想寫“除了這兩個語言意外,我還想再學不同的語言”。但是你寫出來的意思就是“在中文和英文之外,我只想學別的語言”。

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