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Visit Elementary School Tidung. March 22th 2014, I visited Elementary School Tidung. I went to there with Icha, Tika, Risda, Muli, Anda and Chia. They are my group-mates in subject Learning Media. So, we went to there that day to research about what learning media they (teachers) use in every class, also why they chose that media, and what's the superiority + the weakness from the media who they use. Our instructor in that subject gave us that assignment because He went to Umroh for 2 weeks. He didn't want we have no activities, that's why. In there, Tika, Risda and I researched learning media in the class of 3rd. All students in that class studied SBK (Seni Budaya dan Keterampilan/Culture and Creative Arts) exactly apply colours in a picture when we come. So here (In my country), all Elementary School study SBK every Saturday such as draw, dance, sport, apply colours, musics, etc. I was so happy that day. All the students in the class looks so innocent and I like it. Anda and Icha researched in class of 4th. All the students in that class learned pianica. Chia and Muli in class of 5th, all student in that class just did LKS (Students Worksheet) about SBK. After we all researched, took the pict of the learning media, and interviewed the teachers, we went to Headmaster's room to say thank you because He has permitted us to researched learning media in every class. But He was not there in his room. The staff said that He was absent because of sick. So we said thanks with the staff and also we said to them: "Please told him Thank you from us". After that (Nah, it was my favourite moment hahha), we bought some foods in the front of that school. I very like to buy foods in front of the school because they are usualy uniques, yummy, so cheap lol and also remembering me with my childhood :( In there, there were sellers who sell Roasted Meatball, Pudding, Yellow Rice, Pempek, Siomay, etc hahha. Tika and I came home lately (from all my group-mates) because we tasted all the foods in there first hahha. And guees, all the students around the area saw us speechless because we were looks so busy to order the foods in every seller :-\
Apr 9, 2014 4:16 AM
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Visit Tidung Elementary School Tidung. Visit

On March 22th 2014, I visited Tidung Elementary School Tidung. I went to there with Icha, Tika, Risda, Muli, Anda and Chia. They are my group-mates in subject Learning Media subject. So, we went to there that day to research about what learning media they (teachers) the teachers use in every each class, also : what the media is, why they chose that media it, and what's the superiority + the weakness from the media who they use and what difficulties the experienced while using it. Our instructor in that subject gave us that assignment because he went to Umroh for 2 weeks. He didn't want we have no to leave us without any activities, that's why.

 

Notes:

1. I am sorry this correction is only for first paragraph, if I have time I will continue.

2. It's better if you state the place, for example "They are my group-mates in Learning Media subject at school."

3. I don't know which one is correct: he went umroh or he went to do umroh.

April 9, 2014
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Visiting Tidung Elementary School.

On March 22th 2014, I visited Tidung Elementary School. I went to there with Icha, Tika, Risda, Muli, Anda and Chia. They are my group-mates in my Learning Media class. We went to there that day to research about what learning media the teachers use in every class, also why they chose that media, and what were the strengths and weaknesses of the media they used. Our instructor in that subject gave us that assignment because he went to Umroh for 2 weeks, and he didn't want us to have no activities, that's why.

At the school, Tika, Risda and I researched learning media in the 3rd grade class. All students in that class were studying SBK (Seni Budaya dan Keterampilan/Culture and Creative Arts), exactly applying colours in a picture when we came. In my country, all Elementary Schools study SBK every Saturday such as drawing, dance, sport, colouring, musics, etc. I was so happy that day. All the students in the class looked so innocent and I liked it.

Anda and Icha researched in the 4th grade class. All the students in that class learned the pianica. Chia and Muli watched the 5th grade class. The students in that class just did LKS (Students Worksheet) about SBK.

After we all finished researching, taking pictures of the learning media, and interviewing the teachers, we went to the Headmaster's room to say thank you because he gave us permission to do our research. But he was not there in his room. The staff said that he was absent because of sickness. So we said thank you to the staff and also we said to them: "Please thank him for us".

After that (nah, it was my favourite moment hahha), we bought some foods in the front of that school. I really like to buy foods in front of the school because they are usualy uniques, yummy, so cheap lol and they also remind me of my childhood :( There were vendors who sell Roasted Meatballs, Pudding, Yellow Rice, Pempek, Siomay, etc hahha. Tika and I came home last (of all my group-mates) because we tasted all the foods in there first hahha. And guess, All the students in the area were speechless because we looked so busy ordering food from every seller :-\

April 12, 2014
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Second paragraph:

In There, Tika, Risda and I researched learning media used by in the class of 3rd grade students. All students in that class They studied SBK (Seni Budaya dan Keterampilan/Culture and Creative Arts), they were exactly applying colours in a to pictures when we come came. So here (In my country), every Saturday all Elementary School kids study SBK every Saturday such as drawing, dancing, doing sports, applying colours, playing music instruments, etc. I was so happy that day. All the students in the class looks looked so innocent and I like it.

 

Notes:

In western culture, this sentence is not good: "All the students in the class looked so innocent and I like it". Maybe you can say it this way: "All the students in the class looked so innocent and cute."

April 20, 2014
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