My primary school I studyed Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person. He liked

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My primary school I studyed Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person. He liked to encourage kids to do sports outside.

Apr 11, 2014 1:11 AM

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My primary school

I studyed Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person. He liked to encourage kids to do sports outside.

Please also remember to leave a space after the use of a comma.

April 23, 2014

My primary school

I studyed studied Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person1*. He liked to encourage kids to do sports outside2*.

1* you could say "He was patient".

2* 'Outside' is fine but I would mabye have said 'outdoors'

Reads nicely with a good use of natural vocabulary.

April 23, 2014

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